My writing teacher, Cissy, was the most meticulous and the strictest teacher I had ever seen. Pursuing a nearly perfect class, she had high requirement in our photos’ presentation. Although the presentation was limited within three minutes, from selecting the photos to organizing the language to thinking about the nuclear idea, all of the processes should be prepared a long time and couldn’t be dealt with causally; otherwise, you would receive her merciless comment. Any unsatisfactory words occurring in the presentation, breaking in without waiting for the students finishing their speech, she pointed out their faults by sharp words, making you heartbroken and feel like suffering a heavy rain suddenly in a sunny day. Although in simple recital, her strict style still played an important role in it. Disappointed and sad, everyone had experienced the criticism from Cissy, because she thought that not only did we lack right rhythm, but also we couldn’t express our emotion completely and adjust our volume. As a result, receiving her praise was seen as the great honor in our class. A meticulous attitude should be kept in her class. To show respect to the speaker, she didn’t allow us to whisper and after every presentation, genuine applause should be given. It was as a punishment that anyone who forgot to take her picture in the presentation would be cut down her scores and delayed her presentation in the last class. Indeed, being her students made you in risk of being engulfed by her sharp words, but in the same time, due to her strict and meticulous attitude, you would be greatly improved in writing.

　　我的`寫作老師，西西，是最細致、最嚴格的老師我見過。追求一個近乎完美的班級，她對我們的照片有很高的要求。雖然表現為有限的三分鐘內，從選擇照片來組織語言的核心理念的思考，所有的流程要準備很長一段時間不能用因果關系的處理;否則，你將接受她無情的評論。在演示文稿中出現任何不滿意的話，斷無等待的學生完成他們的講話，她指出他們的錯誤的尖銳的話，讓你傷心，覺得遭受大雨突然在一個陽光燦爛的日子。雖然簡單的獨奏音樂會，她嚴謹的作風仍然發揮了重要的作用。失望和悲傷，每個人都經歷了由茜茜的批評，因為她認為我們不僅缺乏正確的節奏，但我們也不能表達我們的情感完全和調整音量。作為一個結果，得到她的贊美被視為在我們班的偉大榮譽。一個細致的態度應該保持在她的課上。為了表示對演講者的尊重，她不允許我們在每一次演講中輕聲低語，在每次演講之后，都應該給予真正的掌聲。這是作為一種懲罰，誰忘記帶她的照片在演示文稿將被削減她的分數和延遲她的介紹，在最后一節課。事實上，她的學生讓你陷入了被她尖銳的言辭所吞噬的風險，但同時，由于她嚴謹細致的工作態度，你會在寫作上有了很大的提高。